In The Mid of Night [OC]

I got ChatGPT to translate a poem I wrote in college.

ChatGPT Translation:

Tonight, I’ll compose verses in your name,

Under a faint moon, where shadows play their game.

While you rest, enveloped in dreams’ gentle hold,

Our love lies between what’s real and stories told.

Tonight, I’ll write for you in the endless deep,

Where wine’s warmth and passions quietly seep.

In the haze of smoke, your essence seems to fade,

Between life’s certainties and the illusions we’ve made.

OG:

Anh sẽ viết cho em một vần thơ

Giữa đêm nay vắng vẻ dưới trăng mờ

Đêm em ngủ êm đềm trên gối mộng

Khuya cuộc tình nữa thực lại nữa mơ

Anh sẽ viết cho em trong mênh mông

Giữa đêm nay hơi ấm rượu men nồng

Đêm khói thuốc bóng em bay mờ ảo

Khuya cuộc đời nữa có nữa lại không

poplargrove, (edited )

Nice work, whoever you originally wrote this for was quite lucky :P

Alyo,

Unfortunately, we weren’t a match. I loved her, but she’s was very superficial. It was the uncertainty of our relationship that made me write it.

Chruesimuesi,

Beautiful 😊

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