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YoungKaitlyn, in Writing A Résumé

Hello

chumbalumber, in The Merlion

Worked here :)

marylandc, in Writing A Résumé

A very good example of an essay. I will take it to myself. Because this is the task I have difficulties with most of the time. That’s why I found nursing essay writing help and it helps me a lot. And it gives me the opportunity to learn better.

voracitude, in One of my favourites — The Murderer by Luke Kennard

I don’t get it. Is it just about never letting people forget their crimes? Or…? Maybe I should just ignore this sub instead of asking stupid questions… I’ve never been good with poetry.

Protoknuckles,

I’m in the same boat, lol. I saved this post so I could see if people started discussing it, so I could understand. I will say it is intriguing though!

chumbalumber,

OP posted their thoughts on it, fyi!

voracitude,

Oh thank god I thought I was gonna be the only one 😂 Maybe the author is the murderer and it’s about him trying to live with it, but never being able to forget? Seems flimsy, even to me.

chumbalumber,

Found some analysis on it:

journals.openedition.org/sillagescritiques/4840

“In my own correspondence with Kennard he suggested that the poem’s message is that “there’s more than one way to murder someone, and the narrator, in his vaudevillian, repetitive cruelty, is the real murderer.”1 So we are meant to see the moral shortcomings of both of the central characters, and the piece appears to make a case for moral relativism: the speaker’s moral pronouncements are comically undermined and the poem seems consistent with postmodernism’s refusal to construct a moral hierarchy.”

Also, this isn’t the full poem. There’s more, and it is really funny (and a bit bleak).

voracitude,

Okay this was very helpful, as was the rest of the poem, in understanding it. I mean, I think I need to read the full analysis while someone with a beret and very small sunglasses plays a bongo out of time in the background, every breath a lungful of stale cigarettes and spilt red wine, to really understand it… but it helps. Thank you! 😊

edit: I think my favourite is

‘I hope you’re not a murderer, too,’ I say. ‘One murderer in my life is quite enough for me.’

‘Actually,’ she says, quietly, ‘I think we’re all murderers.’ I brake for a red light. ‘That’s lucky,’ I say. ‘I imagine it would be difficult going out with a murderer

If you weren’t a moral relativist.’

That is very funny… though I can’t quite describe why. Absurdism, I guess.

funkless_eck,

OP here. Not to get all EngLit teacher, but pretty much any instinctual reaction to art is valid. Perhaps the author wants you to feel slightly confused - as thats a common function of art (see crosswords/puzzles, murder mysteries, stories that start in medias res, magic eyes, postmodern novels, cut up art, or really any art that isn’t entirely linear and explained, which can include naturalistic drama if an antagonists’ motivations aren’t revealed until later)

Perhaps they want you to consider what it means to be a criminal, to observe and interact with a criminal, what it means to serve one’s punishment and the aftermath, what it means to be an ex-criminal, how we imagine our responses to crime (it seems like there’s a bunch of reactions in the poem: rehabilitation, activities in society, removing someone from a cycle, violence, verbal abuse…)

It could also be a reflection on how we use humor to cope — the speaker in the poem knows he’s (friends? accompanying? the officer assigned to?) with a murderer and yet jokes about it - a pretty human thing and an interesting concept for a poem

It also speaks to me of dystopic fiction or experiments in rehabilitation / psychotherapy in the past/present, and the media’s and society’s reaction to such.

Plus, I find it quite amusing even without deeper thought.

amzd,

Well count me confused. Mainly by the second to last line, the ham implies they are both murderers?

funkless_eck,

No, I don’t think so. “Would you like a sandwich? … The murderer eats his sandwich” implies the narrator gives him a sandwich. Cheese and ham is a common sandwich.

amzd,

Nah ham is the flesh of someone else

Southsamurai, in The Duel - Eugene Field

I love it!

stillitcomes, in one of my personal favorites, The Bells

Hadn’t heard of this one. I legit did a double take when I read the author - I guess I can see his style in the poem, on a second read, but like you mentioned it’s really not what you expect of Poe. Thanks for sharing :)

southsamurai,
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That’s one of the things I love about it. You read his other poetry and you expect this totally gothic thing, and it’s the least gloomy thing he wrote. Even the dark bits are filled with the sounds he’s conveying, which lifts it back up.

Varyk, in Anyone want to read some old, classic poems?

Yeah, post 'em.

thetokenlady, in The Minuet - by Mary Mapes Dodge

I need to figure out how to put a line return in, without a space between lines, the formatting is gone

southsamurai,
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Iirc, it’s the same as on reddit.
That would be two spaces at the end of the line, then enter.

Edit: yup, that’s it!

thetokenlady,

Now there’s a space between each line. I wonder if being on mobile has something to do with it.

southsamurai,
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It could. If there’s lag between you hitting enter, and whatever browser/app implementing the markdown, it could well take a bit.

can, in Anyone want to read some old, classic poems?

A cool project would be make a lemmy community out of it and post one each day. But I’d still be interested in reading just a few if you’re not up for such an endeavor.

southsamurai, in Anyone want to read some old, classic poems?
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Hell yeah!

thetokenlady, in There Are Birds Here by Jamaal May

I like this. I like the imagery. Being from the Detroit area, it speaks to me.

southsamurai, in Mod wanted!
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What’s the action like on average?

snakesnakewhale,

Virtually nil. Subscriber count has risen steadily (yay!), but as you can see from the posts the traffic is mainly me. I haven’t had to break up a single fight lol.

Hopefully the community has an active future, but for now it’s a pretty sleepy corner of the site.

southsamurai,
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I can handle that :)

Count me in, if you like.

snakesnakewhale,

Presto. It’s all yours. Have fun!

qwamqwamqwam, in Mod wanted!

Happy to pick up modding! I have no poetry or modding experience though, so literally anyone else would be a better fit. But hey, if no one else volunteers, I’m happy to be the backup option.

stillitcomes, in And Still It Comes by Thomas Lux

Liked this one so much I named myself after it. Ominous.

ThreeHalflings, in piece of shit

When you take some words

and put them on different lines

that makes it

poetry

snakesnakewhale, (edited )

I don’t see the lie.
I see the line break; I see
the frog hop away :(

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