Gone through 36 pages of the WIP, doing some editing today. Once I got the right document as apparently One Drive went wonky at some point and I've ended up with two versions. Very strange WIP. I usually have a good idea whether I like the writing or not (whether anyone else likes it is another issue, I may be totally at odds with what other people consider "good", but I usually know if I think it's good) but I don't with this WIP.
