NaraMoore,
@NaraMoore@sakurajima.moe avatar

@CA_Hawthorne @crcollins

When I say disorganized, I mean on a micro level. The lines appear like I speak, very stream of consciousness. The macro organization is fine. Occasionally, I drop a scene and once I moved a scene way later in the novel because it fit the character arc better there. My mind always wants to rush the romance.

But I def agree at missing subtext or subtext is so sub only I know it is there. Miss opportunities galore. Most of those one minute jotting writing sessions are the crystallization of one of those opportunities and how to say it.

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