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2405.02 — What are your MC’s living conditions like? Are they better or worse than average?

Wow, this question! A bit of background: I wrote the original novella, then wrote a prequel novel based on the history in the first story, then retconned the novella, worsened the situation and followed it with new events to make it a novel, /then/ wrote the sequel. It's her life story, now.

In this last story, the answer to this question is the running joke. The new work takes place over three days. She starts having been living with a fellow student, an ever-seeking-male-companionship elite who months ago offered her a free roommate situation—so long as the MC slept with her in the same bed (and her new roommate only sleeps well being held). The next day it's the couch after the MC is reunited with a former coworker (bodyguard) whom she introduces to her elite roommate. They hit it off. Noisily. All night long! The next night, not wanting a repeat performance, she connives to spend a (satisfying) night with her new boyfriend in "palatial" digs in the Residency where the main antagonist lives, but is currently out on a military adventure. Having reconciled with a childhood friend, the subsequent night she ends up on his bed, in a Residency guest suite, sleeping with him and a pile of thaumaturgy books they nerded out over. She regrets not having had more fun with him, but he's too sweet and obviously not ready for that. The next day, she's fighting for her life in a hospital.

Her living conditions are way above average, arguably superior.

Previous Living Conditions

  • Born in a nice house in an obscure village
  • Raised in a newly built mansion for a newly titled elite (her)
  • Homeless for months, having run away, living in encampments and wandering the east coast
  • Big city hostel for over a year
  • Gangland trainer's nice apartment with separate beds
  • Boarding house with aspects of a brothel, where she must defend herself
  • Leased a one room dance studio where she sleeps on a mat between a wall of open windows and a wall of mirrors, having no need of further furniture
  • A series of high line hotel and mansion rooms owned the Doña she works for
  • Homeless
  • A tenement room she makes her own, detailed in this short Mastodon post titled, Where Most Comfortable: https://eldritch.cafe/@sfwrtr/109826357405137553
  • Roommate situation at the top of this post

As for the homelessness, she was moving around without money while hiding her identity, and rarely stayed long. The worst was trying to sleep under eaves in the city during storms; she didn't always have a tent. Regardless, it qualifies as below average living conditions for a total of about a year. It did focus her like of asceticism.

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