Firlefanz, to random
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- How would your characters attempt to catch a leprechaun?

South would try to befriend it.

West would race after it and catch it because he's fast.

East would pummel it into submission.

North would run even faster than West.

Earth would build a trap.

Sky would smash one with lightning.

Sun would... probably let it go.

Sun Burns, Pillars of the Empire 3
(WiP)


Firlefanz, to random
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3.17 — Describe a traditional celebration in your world.

The most important day in the Holy Empire is the Winter Solstice.

That's when the sacrifices begin. They take the lives of the current First House, four Pillars in the Sacred Square, four Winds at the edges of the Empire. Their deaths ensure the strength of the Veil.

For the general populace, those four days are days of feasting and dancing, a great festival.

Winds and Pillars Series


Firlefanz, to random
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255 — What is something your MC is reluctant to tell people?

Sun certainly does not like telling people he's a Pillar. At least in the Holy Empire, that would mean a terrible death for him.

He can't quite shake that fear even after he manages to flee.

Unfortunately, there are situations when he can't hide he can wield fire. (He's a fire mage in more common terms.) Those terrify him.

Sun Burns, Pillars of the Empire 3
(WiP)


Firlefanz, to random
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3.14 — What role does ethnicity play in your world?

Not a very big one, to be honest.

There are people living in different region of the continent, with different traditions, society and history, and there might actually some typical physical features, but it doesn't impact my characters or story much.

My Winds and Pillars actually enjoy meeting people from outside the Holy Empire.

That is very different from the Wolves. They are killed for it.


Firlefanz, to random German
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12.3. Wo und wie schläft deine Hauptfigur am Anfang der Geschichte? Und am Ende?

Am Anfang schläft Sun in seinem House, im Sacred Square, dort wo er sein Leben lang gelebt hat. Er sollte dort auch sterben (genauer, auf der Sun Pyramid), aber daraus wurde dann nichts.

Am Ende schläft er in seinem Bett in seinem neuen Zuhause, ziemlich glücklich. 😉 Und mit einer neuen Aufgabe.

Sun Burns, Pillars of the Empire 3
(WiP)


Firlefanz, to random
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251 — What clothing materials or outfits feel the most comfortable to your MC?

Sun is used to the uncolored cotton clothes he and his House have been given all their lives. They all wear the same simple pants with drawstrings and shirts without collars.

They are not going anywhere, so there is no need for fancy clothes. Of course, his were often stained from food spills that no magic could clear.

Sun Burns, Pillars of the Empire 3
(WiP)


Firlefanz, to random
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3/11. What do they appreciate most (antagonists, world)?

The Head Priest of Jungle Fortress absolutely loves the fact that Priests rule over the Holy Empire. It has given him everything, power, luxury, the sense of being needed.

He's part of the ruling class, and he savors that feeling. In fact, he wants to rise even higher. And when he catches Sky, he knows he's so close to his goal.

Sky Falls, Pillars of the Empire 2
(available in all stores)


Firlefanz, to random
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3/10. What annoys your antagonist most about the world they live in?

The Head Priest of Jungle Fortress (sorry, keep coming back to him) would really like to get his hands on his own Winds and Pillars - called Stars when they are not in the Sacred Square. (People with magical powers.)

He has one Star, but he could do so much more if he had a House. Not that he'll ever get it...

Sky Falls, Pillars of the Empire 2
(available in all stores)


Firlefanz, to random
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250 — Does your SC have next-door neighbors? Who are they?

Well, Laisal is a Sun Priestess, and so she lives next to the Sacred Square, where all the Winds and Pillars are.

Not that she gets to interact with them a lot, they are locked into their Houses for a reason.

Only when something very strange happens and she gets to know Sun Snake, everything changes for her. And she might fall in love...

Sun Burns, Pillars of the Empire 3
(WiP)


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Firlefanz, to random
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3/9: If your MC doesn't want to be social, will they be direct or make an excuse?

Sun is not used to being alone much, after living with the same seven people in a fairly small space all his life.

And he is most certainly not used to speak up for himself. So he'll mumble something as an excuse and hide in a corner or the edge of camp when he can't handle things anymore.

Sun Burns, Pillars of the Empire 3
(WiP)


Firlefanz, to random
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249 — MC POV: What is something you were insecure about when you were a child?

Sun: "My powers. They were always so hard to control. Moon helped me a lot with that, we practiced so much together that we became very close.

"Most of the time, we worked together. Every day. But we don't anymore. I... I can't...

"I miss him so much." rubs his eyes with the heel of his hands

Sun Burns, Pillars of the Empire 3
(WiP)


Firlefanz, to random
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247. Who does your MC or SC share their deepest secrets with?

For Sun, that has always been Moon, his fellow Snake and House brother. They always worked together. Sun has no idea that Moon was his twin, however.

Now Moon is dead, and Sun hasn't even had time to properly grieve him. So no, right now, he has nobody he will share his secrets with, not even Laisal.

That will eventually change.

Sun Burns, Pillars of the Empire 3
(WiP)


Firlefanz, to random
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3/8. Would you be welcome (if you had to stay with one of your characters for a week)?

I'm sure West and Jeko would be happy to have me. I share their love for horses/mules.

And I mean... I'm the one who got them together. Or allowed West do do that (yes, he did surprise me there).

I think we'd have a lot of fun, going on rides and chatting the evenings away.

West Flows, Winds of Destiny 2


Firlefanz, to random
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245 — Where does your villain draw inspiration in life? What motivates them?

Back to the Head Priest of Jungle Fortress...

He genuinely believes he's protecting the Holy Empire and helping its people thrive. Which absolutely means controlling any rogue mages - like Sky.

Of course, he also enjoys the luxuries his position allows him, but most of all, he thinks he deserves it, as he's the good guy.

Sky Falls, Pillars of the Empire 2


Firlefanz, to random
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3/6: What 3 questions would your MC ask to get to know you?

Sun:

  1. Do you have power and if yes, which one?
  2. Are you a Priest?
  3. Where do you come from?

Sun Burns, Pillars of the Empire 3
(WiP)


Firlefanz, to random
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5/3
What sounds would your antagonist hear in their favourite place?

The Head Priest of Jungle Fortress would hear the soft murmur of their servants and the fawning words of the Priests under their command.

He might even hear the pleas of people asking for support from the Priests - and sometimes, he might decide to get a House to work on it. (Not that he controls a House.)

He leads a very relaxed life.

Sky Falls, Pillars of the Empire 2


Firlefanz, to random German
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5.3.
Gesetzt den Fall, es sei möglich, würdest du deine Geschichte deiner Oma vorlesen? Was würde sie davon halten?

Nicht viel, fürchte ich. Fantasy war nicht so ihr Ding. Und während Sun nicht viel Sex hat, halten das andere Figuren auch mal anders.

Nee, ich glaube, das wäre kein Erfolg. Und deswegen würde ich ihr meine Geschichten nicht vorlesen, selbst wenn es möglich wäre.

Sun Burns, Pillars of the Empire 3
(WiP)


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244 — Do your characters have any co-workers they’re close with? Are there any they can’t stand?

Sun's "co-workers" are the members of his House.

He's very close to Moon, who feels like a brother to him. Both of them are fond of South.

He doesn't care as much for the rest of his House, but nobody he outright hates. They had years to learn to live with each other. And now it's all coming to an end.

Sun Burns, Pillars of the Empire 3


Firlefanz, to random
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4/3 If your SC had to describe their world to an alien who knew nothing about it, what would they say?

Laisal: "It's a beautiful world with gentle people, but stay away from the Holy Empire.

"Seriously. They would only try to use you and your powers. They have done that for at least 200 years now.

"Can't suggest a better place just yet, but explore some more, okay?"

Sun Burns, Pillars of the Empire 3
(WiP, release planned for summer)


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243 — Imagine, if you will, an alternate universe… Which of your characters is most likely to attempt karaoke?

Of all my Winds and Pillars, probably Sky.

Not that he can sing, but he has this sense of mischief that would let him try. And his West would cheer him on.

East would grumble, West would snuggle his Jeko, and South would tap her fingers to the beat. North would smile her shy smile. Earth might do a round, too, after Sky.


Firlefanz, (edited ) to sciencefiction
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3/3: How much of your worlds are invented versus real? Give examples.

The Cloud Lands: totally invented. With dragons.

The Holy Empire: completely invented. Without dragons.

The Wolves? Our world, with the addition of shifters. I use Google Maps a LOT.

Franssisi Four: Invented planet, terraformed far in the future. With Aliens.

I prefer writing in invented worlds. It means so much less research. 😂




failedLyndonLaRouchite, to books

my snark is stronger cause it goes to 11 type of post

everyone who is doing anything with fantasy type stuff:

read this first
http://www.rinkworks.com/fnovel/

@bookstodon @bookstadon @sffbookclub @fantasy @ttrpg @lgbtqbookstodon @paranormal @horrorbooks

Firlefanz, to random
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3/3. What food from your fridge or favorite restaurant would your MC enjoy the most?

Easy answer: I keep my chocolate in the fridge (for reasons), and he would absolutely love chocolate.

And once I'd introduced him to chocolate ice creme, well... he wouldn't look back.

Chocolate it is.

Sun Burns, Pillars of the Empire 3
(WiP)


notroot, to fantasy

My Top 10 Epic Fantasy series

A few criteria. Must be EPIC fantasy. Must be finished (Tolkien gets a pass). Must be character-driven with long plot arcs that resolve with catharsis. I have to like the protagonist and their allies.

Magic Key: [S] Soft, [M] Mushy, [F] Firm, [H] Hard

  1. The Wars of Light and Shadow by Janny Wurtz. A story about wild, endangered, magical creatures, and the absurdly overpowered wizards and dragons who protect them. Uncannily personal, beautiful and cruel as a landslide. Power is bound to empathy, to the planet, to life, itself. There's no other magic like TWoLaS... Trust me. Read this. [M]

  2. Realm of the Elderlings by Robin Hobb. I can barely read sometimes, because the tears ... It's cathartic, and epic. When you get to the penultimate end of all 16 books, and the Keystone drops, and the arcs resolve into sudden synchronicity... That is literature. [M]

  3. Anything written by JRR Tolkien. [S]

  4. Pellinor by Allison Croggon. Bards keep the Balance on a lost continent of Earth. It's beguilingly fae, an honest homage to Tolkien that puts music, nature, and a wild child at the fulcrum of world-changing events. An honest homage to Tolkien, but with such gift of craft it steps boldly into more personal territory. [M]

  5. ANY epic fantasy by NK Jemisin, including Dreamblood, Broken Earth, and Inheritance. Each is a world unto itself, and epic. Dreamblood is probably my favorite, and the more traditional fantasy, but I can't pick just one. [H]

  6. Lyonesse by Jack Vance. A beautiful, terrifying, mad-cap fairy-tale written by a grand-master of the English language (keep a thesaurus handy), Enter the antediluvian realm of the Elder Isles, where Avallon and Ys vie for dominance, and fairy creatures still haunt the woods and wield their uncanny magics. It is also utterly depraved, OK? Grimdark got nothin' on Jack Vance. You read that right. This is not your kindly storyteller unraveling a lovely yarn. [S]

  7. Black Company by Glen Cook. Epic Sword & Sorcery that will surprise you no matter how many times you read them all. [S]

  8. A Man of His Word by Dave Duncan. Utterly unique, uncanny and magical epic. You may not see it at first, but Duncan has firm, almost hard, rules of magic. Every detail matters. [F]

  9. Riftwar by Raymond Feist. Dude. It's EPIC. But with like 40 books, including 3 books co-written by Janny Wurtz (my #1), be prepared for a long read, with a lot of court intrigue. He's a rare writer who just got better with time. He's still writing and his Firemane is ongoing and grimdark, and really good. [F]

  10. David Eddings, although I think The Malloreon and later works are better than The Belgariad. That's saying something, though, because it's pretty great. [S]

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Note: Looking the above SMFH (pronounced, "Smurf") results, I can only conclude that I prefer Soft & Mushy to Firm & Hard, when it comes to fantasy.

notroot,

The Belgariad by David Eddings (1984)

I'm going to read the rest of Eddings' epics in the realm of the Kingdoms of the West and the Angaraks, and will post about them when I get to them. Eddings wrote three other epic series -- The Malloreon, The Elenium, and The Tamuli -- and what I remember from my last reading 10 years ago, each is better than the one before it. So I was looking forward to this re-read.

I haven't been disappointed. I'm almost to the end of The Belgariad and it is much richer and more interesting than I remembered from my previous reading.

The Belgariad is really about a prophecy, or really, two diametrically opposed prophecies, and the magic power of their opposition. It is this tension between different fates for the world that seems to drive magic, and history -- kingdoms and empires and global political forces.

First published in 1984, The Belgariad does reflect some of the tropes and flaws of the Tolkien-pretender era of fantasy writing, perhaps exemplified by Terry Brooks and Steven King, who openly state that they wanted to write an epic because of Tolkien. Eddings motives preface my edition:

I'd noticed that high fantasy lacked the gritty realism of The Grapes of Wrath or For Whom the Bell Tolls, so in a sense, our fantasies have been an experiment in form -- "Realistic Fantasy," perhaps (or Fantastic Realism, take your pick).

I still think The Belgariad falls short of his literary ambitions. His vision and storytelling are still somewhat juvenile in the manner of Brooks, Jordan, King, or countless other authors who imitated Tolkien in that era. But like Brooks, and unlike Jordan or King... Eddings got better at it. Leaps and bounds better at it than Brooks did.

To sum, I'm going to keep reading before I post any real reviews, but I'll post these meta-reviews when I feel like it for each series in the Eddings saga.

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