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NaraMoore

@NaraMoore@sakurajima.moe

Fast run down: (You really should read it if you're following me.)

✒️I'm an #LightNovel author of #Yuri #Paranormal #Romance. (#YuriWierdTales)

⛩️👻My work in progress is “For Love of a Konbini Idol, I Faced Her Onry Lover.”

🎌I microblog on Japanese underground idols. (Chika)
✒️I post frequently to writer’s and music prompts and post plushie & food pictures.

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⛩️👻My serialized novel: #KonbiniIdol
✒️Writing: #Writing #WritersCoffeeClub #WordWeavers #PennedPossibilities
🎌Idols: #Jidol #KaigaiIdol #MenmaMonday
🎵Music: #TuneTuesday #MusicWomenWednesday #JMusicFriday
🧸Plushie: #Plushie

🎵🎌I sponsor the music prompt JMusicFiday, the" Daily Tsukishiro Himari" and MenmaMonday

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NaraMoore, to writing
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314 — Has your MC ever felt as though they were reborn in the mental / emotional sense?

Kaori the LI in my second novel starts the novel off feeling this way. She sees her destined romantic partner and allows her to turn her life around.

Shiomi/Shishi has this moment at the end of volume one of Konkini Idol. But I'm not saying any more about that since it is the whole driving issue and climax of that volume.

NaraMoore, to random
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. What role do other writers have in your writing life?

Beta readers and sense of community.

NaraMoore, to writing
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14. Do you have a sense of how much plot you need for how long a manuscript?

Starting point, Ending point. and some ideas of major landmarks. That comes out as 10 to 12 bullet points, character sketches for the major characters, and probably one or two scenes written. I invest far more time in the characters than the plot.

NaraMoore, to random
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Weird, Bizarre, and Scary News From Japan April 2024

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q453Le3MSwE

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May 13: When does AI cross the line between helpful tool and problematic tech for writing and publishing?

I am an active luddite and do what I can to sabotage AI.

When does it cross the line?

  1. When steals training material.
  2. When it plagiarizes or mimics others.
  3. When they utilize immoral terms of service. i.e looting social media that have implemented "legalized theft."
  4. When it attempts to substitute itself for real individuals.
  5. When it attempts to pass itself off as human output.
  6. When it attempts to imply it is "intelligence."

In other words, everything that currently labels itself as AI. "Deep Learning" tools could be acceptable but not as they are currently implemented and run.

Oh forgot when it uses "sweatshop" labor.

NaraMoore,
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@smochi

Lack of ethics?

The dominant AI models are trained on stolen material or utilize the "legalized theft" implemented by SNS platform's TOS. Sweatshop labor is used to groom it. It does not credit its sources which is plagiarism.

It does nothing to hinder unethical people from passing off the products as their own. So while it may not directly pass itself off as human-produced it blandly winks at it.

It is marketed as intelligence. A lie.

Burn it down
Poison it.

NaraMoore,
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@smochi

Indeed.

I am all for banning guns AND suing gun manufacturers.
I am all for poisoning AI AND suing millionaire pirates.

And when we have set reasonable boundaries for ML moving forward. People seemed to have missed my statement that I am not opposed to ML only the way it has been implemented and the direction it is moving in.

Shanmonster, to linguistics
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I was very briefly in a discord group for writers that I’d been invited to join. Someone posted something which included the word “bullshit,” and the discord host said there was no room for such language as it was a “family-friendly” forum, something that was definitely not mentioned before I joined up. I quickly left the server, as I use words much more salty than that, and do not write “family-friendly” fiction.
#WarningContainsLanguage #language #bullshit #WritingCommunity

NaraMoore,
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@Shanmonster

Bet I know the one. And with that level of censorship, I probably should leave.

CA_Hawthorne, to writing
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13
AI crossing the line

It never crosses the line.

Humans using it cross the line.

If it tells the writer a sentence is wrong, that’s fine. If the writer substitutes the sentence AI provides, that’s the line crossed.

And that's just the little stuff.

I shouldn’t have to explain this.

NaraMoore,
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@CA_Hawthorne

And guns don't kill
The person pulling the trigger does.

AI as implemented is immoral, it is created by exploitation and implements more exploitation.

NaraMoore, to random
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313 — Is your MC or SC one to confess romantic feelings early on, or to conceal them for long periods of time?

Traditionally: My narrative character takes a long time to confess romantic feelings and the LI is all over it right from the start.

In my WIP the characters are Disaster Lesbians so they are having a great deal of trouble confessing their feelings.

NaraMoore, to writing
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13. Describe a place that has a special significance in your story.

Muko - The Shadowland is a space existing all around us, though few can see it. It is where supernatural beings exist, some ancient and others sparked by recent legends and stories. It is also where souls that can't pass over become stuck. Descriptions of it vary depending on the observer and how deeply they penetrate it. This is not a place meant for living humans.

The uninformed view it as hostile but that is a misunderstanding. It is alien and its and its inhabitants' desires are different than our own Sometimes they harm humans in the mundane world and sometimes bring benefit.

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#Writing 311 — What is a memory that makes your SC swell with pride?

From: "Konbini Idol"

There was a long silence, broken only by the sound of the heater and the rattle of the car, then a soft reply. “A book about Fukitsu? I would love that, but no soppy ending. Let her wear her misfortune proudly till the end.”

“No soppy ending,” she repeated. “You don’t think I understand the irony of my existence. I am Fukitsu, the Kami of Misfortune, and misfortune has followed me all my life. Without singing and dancing, all I have left is tragedy. Without tragedy, I am nothing more than a poorly educated girl working in a dead-end job.”

NaraMoore, to writing
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312
Is your MC or SC a leader, a follower, or something in between?

Saeki and Shiro start as followers but in different ways face what it means to be a leader.

This is also a question that faces Ume.

Saying much more would be in spoiler territory.

NaraMoore, to writing
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24-05-12. Who is the best friend in your story?

It's complicated with a cast that includes ace alloromantic characters. But I suppose it's Kaori and Kan-chan, Shiro's partners. They are very good friends, Kan-chan sometimes calls Kaori sis.

teddytedaloo, to random
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tee hee! i did a guest appearance on mama's podcast interview!

NaraMoore,
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@teddytedaloo

Told you that you were movie star material.

teddytedaloo, to plushies
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NaraMoore,
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@teddytedaloo

Looking good!

Ever thought of starring in a movie?

Or have you already?

NaraMoore, (edited ) to writing
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11. What character have you written that’s the most unlike you?

Wow, any of the creepypasta characters. I bear no resemblance to a supernatural youkai. I am not a primal force of controlling, jealous love. I’m not a primal force at all, in fact. I have no great desire for revenge. They're not human and I am.

NaraMoore, to writing
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11. Who is the best leader in your story?

Kaori: That would be Shiro. Smart, modest, caring, interested in the welfare of those that she leads.

Kan-chan: Able to take advice from those she leads.

Arisu: I beg to differ. It would have to be Sayaki.

Shiomi: No it’s Ume.

Ume and Sayaki point their finger at Shiro who is doing her best to hid.

mitziszereto, to random
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After reading this message sent to my Twitter/X account, I definitely want this person to help me sell my books!

"Hi Mitzi Szereto,your story are nice but do you know that your work has not gone unnoticed to some audience?"

NaraMoore,
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@mitziszereto

You must share their user id. Can't pass up an opportunity like this.

NaraMoore, to Sleeping
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Ops! By Design

I was working at Microsoft again as a Software Test Engineer and discovered they had broken the microwave feature. It could no longer detect if you had put metal in the microwave and it was sparking.

When I put the bug report in it was closed with the note. We can’t fix this.

I reopened it with the comment, “This worked in Windows 10.”

It was closed again, and a project manager told me to drop it. It was too late in the product cycle to fix now.

So I came in early in the morning, lined up all the computers in the test lab. Put metal cans in the microwaves and blew up the computers and the electrical system of the MS campus.

Then sent a message saying:

Ops! By Design.

NaraMoore, (edited ) to writing
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10. Antagonist POV: What do you like the most about yourself?

Assumes a level of self awareness my antags don't have.

NaraMoore, to Sleeping
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I took a massive dose of deadly nightshade to find out what it was like. (No, I haven’t been reading “The Apothecary Diaries” lately.)

We went to the local doctor and sat on their driveway, a long gravel drive through stately towering trees. They took their bag out of a car, and after searching around, declared they had mislaid their atropine and would have to go to the house to get it.

CA_Hawthorne, to random
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Good day!

The weather starts inching towards mild today.

Time to finish Chapter 73. I was dragging yesterday after an awful night’s sleep. This morning, I feel refreshed and eager to attack whatever comes my way.

Owing to drafting Book-2 while gravely ill in late 2016, the story is a patchwork of chapters added at various times. This chapter, the latest, was added 14-months ago.

In the end, it’s the polished whole that matters.

Be everwell.

#Today #WritingLife #AmWriting #WritingCommunity

NaraMoore,
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@CA_Hawthorne @crcollins

When I say disorganized, I mean on a micro level. The lines appear like I speak, very stream of consciousness. The macro organization is fine. Occasionally, I drop a scene and once I moved a scene way later in the novel because it fit the character arc better there. My mind always wants to rush the romance.

But I def agree at missing subtext or subtext is so sub only I know it is there. Miss opportunities galore. Most of those one minute jotting writing sessions are the crystallization of one of those opportunities and how to say it.

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5/1—OMG! What happened to your MC's parents?

Most of my MCs are estranged from their parents, but alive and well elsewhere. I have killed off at least one (a father), but I prefer to keep them distant and cold.

NaraMoore,
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@benetnasch

I looked at one "AI" engine and all it did was plagiarize Wikipedia.

NaraMoore, to Horror
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Mistake

It's not mistake:

Instead of letting me go, she said, “You shouldn’t. That’s a graveyard and she’s dead.”

Everyone said that, but it was a mistake. I had seen Mikawa, and she was definitely alive. Why wouldn’t Ume let me go? All I wanted to do was be with my girlfriend. Did this damn bitch think I would go with her when I had Mika?

“Fuck you,” I said and tried to get away. “She’s waiting. Mika is waiting.”

In serialization at:
https://yuribynaramoore.yoshino.garden/konbini-idol/
https://archiveofourown.org/works/52770025
https://www.pixiv.net/novel/series/11417104

Art: @Maisensei

NaraMoore, (edited )
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For Love of a Konbini Idol, I Braved the Otherside

Released Chapter 19: Kitoushi (祈祷師)

By @NaraMoore
Art @Maisensei

Kaori and Kan-chan set about their business and throw cold water on the idea of a simple solution. Tomo is forced to rethink his relationship with Shiomi. (A little)

Join Ume and her family in a world where shadows hold hidden secrets as their relationships develop.

At: https://yuribynaramoore.yoshino.garden/konbini-idol/
https://www.pixiv.net/novel/series/11417104
https://archiveofourown.org/works/52770025

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