dgar, (edited )
@dgar@aus.social avatar

I'm thinking of going with this artwork for the new single.

What do you think?

CosmicTrigger,
@CosmicTrigger@kolektiva.social avatar

@dgar Most of the artwork for my Soundcloud songs are just images I found using Google search but I actually made this one special for a song:

dgar,
@dgar@aus.social avatar

@CosmicTrigger You drew this? You should definitely be giving all your tracks this treatment!!

CosmicTrigger,
@CosmicTrigger@kolektiva.social avatar

@dgar I made it. I didn't draw it. I can draw, but the Pippi Longstocking image was too funny to pass up

howlinhobbit,
@howlinhobbit@musicians.today avatar

@dgar @CosmicTrigger

Pippi Longstocking? I thought she was Molly Tov Cocktail.

CosmicTrigger,
@CosmicTrigger@kolektiva.social avatar

@howlinhobbit Good one'

CosmicTrigger,
@CosmicTrigger@kolektiva.social avatar

@dgar This is an album cover I made/drew for my rock band. Each section corresponds to a different song but I need to swap out the 7 o clock section with my own art rather than a collage of other people's. Because 5 o clock proves I can

dgar,
@dgar@aus.social avatar

@CosmicTrigger That’s awesome!! 🤩

CosmicTrigger,
@CosmicTrigger@kolektiva.social avatar

@dgar I wanted to be a cartoonist when I was a kid, but never kept it up, really. But after I started tripping, my cartoons got much weirder.

This is the artwork for a flyer for a show I did for my band in 1999

dgar,
@dgar@aus.social avatar

@CosmicTrigger
… so why not do this for cover art? It looks great!

CosmicTrigger, (edited )
@CosmicTrigger@kolektiva.social avatar

@dgar I am going to use it for cover art. For the 3rd album. The thing is, the name of the third album is the same as an album by the weird 70s experimental band The Residents, but I'm probably on thin ice with the kolektiva admins right now.

But it's a reference to the WW2 Government of Germany plus the words "and Roll"

(Let's just say "The Third Rock and Roll")

Here's the 2nd album cover

dgar, (edited )
@dgar@aus.social avatar

Regarding the original toot.

JeniParsons,
@JeniParsons@mstdn.social avatar

@dgar the tree looks like the UK Tory symbol 🤮

dgar,
@dgar@aus.social avatar

@JeniParsons

Cunning marketing by the UK Tories.

Also. No, it doesn’t. 😏

trelord75,
AltlandaJuristo,
@AltlandaJuristo@esperanto.masto.host avatar

@trelord75 @dgar
Klasikaĵo

dgar,
@dgar@aus.social avatar

@trelord75
Yes. 🤭

Victang,
@Victang@beige.party avatar

@dgar
I'd take your logo off the car and turn it into a sign along the road.

dgar,
@dgar@aus.social avatar

@Victang
✌️😁👍
Nice idea!

staringatclouds,
@staringatclouds@mastodon.social avatar

@dgar As others have said

The Dgar logo would look good as a road sign

The car would be better if it were hand drawn, it's a lot of work though, you could try tracing round the original, might make it easier

dgar,
@dgar@aus.social avatar

@staringatclouds
Thank you for your suggestions!
✌️😁👍

Drawn car might not look better too….

staringatclouds,
@staringatclouds@mastodon.social avatar

@dgar It's one of those that you won't know unless you try it & you don't want to wreck the original 'cos even as a photo the whole thing is pretty good

Tricky...

dgar,
@dgar@aus.social avatar

@staringatclouds
The photo is the actual car that inspired the song too… so…

I’ve been working on it. I’ve put an outline around it so it resembles a sticker now.

dgar,
@dgar@aus.social avatar

@staringatclouds @siblingpastry
Both of you want a redrawn can and I’m being stubborn or lazy, but I also know how bad I am at drawing cars…
🖌️ 🥴
Sorry. 🤗

siblingpastry,
@siblingpastry@mastodon.world avatar

@dgar I think the car photo spoils it, I'd make it a line drawing styled like the rest of the picture.

dgar,
@dgar@aus.social avatar

@siblingpastry
I absolutely know where you’re coming from. I’d have to redraw the tree too.

siblingpastry, (edited )
@siblingpastry@mastodon.world avatar

@dgar I like the tree :-) It does have some style variation to the background, but that gives me a flavor of like a kids sketch book that they later put stickers in, the styles are compatible.

So you could have the car in bolder relief and with the decal, just not a photo

dgar,
@dgar@aus.social avatar

@siblingpastry oh! Outline on the car so it looks like a sticker! Nice, I’ll definitely play with that. Thanks for the suggestions!!

dgar,
@dgar@aus.social avatar

@siblingpastry 🤭sorry, just reread your comment and that’s not what you meant, but thanks anyway!! 😁

siblingpastry,
@siblingpastry@mastodon.world avatar

@dgar But what you said sounds good too :-)

siblingpastry, (edited )
@siblingpastry@mastodon.world avatar

@dgar Unless we're talking at metaphysical cross purposes lol. How do you know that my perceptual universe means the same thing by "car" or "tree"

🌲

Like that emoji is a car, right?

dgar,
@dgar@aus.social avatar

@siblingpastry
In the immortal words of Kurt Cobain “You can plant a car, you can drive a tree, I don’t even care, we could have all three.”

siblingpastry,
@siblingpastry@mastodon.world avatar

@dgar Polly wants a cracker now.

dgar,
@dgar@aus.social avatar

@siblingpastry
🤘😆🤘

dgar,
@dgar@aus.social avatar

@siblingpastry Also, the dolphin decals are relevant, and that’d be fiddly to draw too. 🤔

dgar, (edited )
@dgar@aus.social avatar

Thank you everyone for your input!!

I have learned that fewer than 50% say it’s good to go, but only a few gave a thumbs down. There were several good suggestions and helpful observations in the comments.

And about a quarter of you have donkeys, which is surprising.

The result is a different font used, logo removed, a third m-bird, a sticker outline on the car cutout, redrawn tree, plus some other details added here and there.

Sincerely, thank you all for your insights and contributions on this childish, lazy, attempt at cover art. This will be the only time I do one in this kind of “style”. It is undeniably better for your input. The song is going to be available first on Soundcloud, and distributed to the other streaming sites in a couple of weeks. I’ll post a link on this thread in a couple of hours when it becomes available.

Love you all!! 🫶

dgar,
@dgar@aus.social avatar

Okay, it is live on Soundcloud! I hope you like it!

Little Black Hatchback
~ Dgar

https://soundcloud.com/dgarmusic/little-black-hatchback

dgar, (edited )
@dgar@aus.social avatar

Full release to all the streamy places will be on the 29th March.

In the meantime, I think it sits nicely as track two on my Singles and B-Sides playlist on , which I keep in the order that I think would work if they were released as an album.

Thank you all for following along. Next release is set for 20th April. Big love to everyone!!

https://on.soundcloud.com/sSVVBK451nKkKrjR9

josh,

@dgar For just a moment I was a teenager again. <3

I appreciate you.

dgar,
@dgar@aus.social avatar

@josh 🤗🫶
Naww, thank you!!
✌️🤩 🤘

elala,
@elala@nrw.social avatar

@dgar
Good vibrations 🤗 😁

dgar,
@dgar@aus.social avatar

@elala Thank you! 🫶

humanhorseshoes,
@humanhorseshoes@mastodon.world avatar

@dgar I did my driving test in one of those cars. A 1 litre diesel Daihatsu Charade.

dgar,
@dgar@aus.social avatar

@humanhorseshoes
999cc to be precise, for registration purposes…
It was cheaper if it was under a litre.
✌️😊👍

Snowshadow,
@Snowshadow@mastodon.social avatar

@dgar It wasn't a "childish attempt". I liked it.
Looking forward to the new song.😀

Wow. I didn't know donkeys were so popular.😂

dgar,
@dgar@aus.social avatar

@Snowshadow ☺️

BackFromTheDud,
@BackFromTheDud@mas.to avatar

@dgar A Geo? Really?

dgar,
@dgar@aus.social avatar

@BackFromTheDud
It’s a Charade!!

BackFromTheDud,
@BackFromTheDud@mas.to avatar

@dgar Even worse!!

dgar,
@dgar@aus.social avatar
BackFromTheDud,
@BackFromTheDud@mas.to avatar

@dgar Like I can talk, driving a 2001 Corsa. "How basic would you like your car to be? Crank windows and no ABS? You got it!"

dgar,
@dgar@aus.social avatar

@BackFromTheDud
Yes, yes… but what do you think of the song?
🧐🤔😁

BackFromTheDud,
@BackFromTheDud@mas.to avatar

@dgar There's a song?! 😎

dgar,
@dgar@aus.social avatar
Slash909uk,
@Slash909uk@mastodon.me.uk avatar

@dgar looks like a scene from the Amazing world of Gumball where they mix up the art styles. I like it! Make the car look like it was torn from a magazine maybe? So the whole thing is like a montage?

dgar,
@dgar@aus.social avatar

@Slash909uk Thank you!! I’m going to try and make the car look more like a sticker, with a little outline around it.
✌️😁👍

axeshun,
@axeshun@toad.social avatar

@dgar very Dgar-noire

dgar,
@dgar@aus.social avatar

@axeshun
✌️😁🤘

ada,
@ada@blahaj.zone avatar

@dgar Dolphinitely this one!

dgar,
@dgar@aus.social avatar

@ada 😁

Soupy51,
@Soupy51@mastodon.online avatar

@dgar

I think your text needs to be a darker colour and thicker font. That way your eye is drawn (no pun) to title first.

dgar,
@dgar@aus.social avatar

@Soupy51 Yes, I will change the typeface.

mdstevens0612,
@mdstevens0612@mas.to avatar

@dgar I would say maybe do another revision or two. Font could be a little more thematically appropriate, it's a bit stuffy for the crayon drawing magazine clipping concept. Would also maybe revise the tree, it looks a bit MS Paint compared to everything surrounding it. Maybe do something with a darker outline and a sketchy fill? Hopefully attached pic illustrates what I mean.

dgar,
@dgar@aus.social avatar

@mdstevens0612
Thanks for the suggestion! I agree that the tree is a bit jarring against the rest of the image.

elala,
@elala@nrw.social avatar

@dgar
But this is not a real VW bus.😏

dgar,
@dgar@aus.social avatar

@elala It’s my long lost Daihatsu Charade. 🤭

asbestos,
@asbestos@toot.community avatar

@dgar
I think you need a different typeface. I'd also work on the sticker on the side of the car to make it look more like it's actually on the car. But overall it's pretty good. Definitely sets a vibe

dgar,
@dgar@aus.social avatar

@asbestos Something bold and sans-serif?

asbestos,
@asbestos@toot.community avatar

@dgar
Not sure, that one is a little thin and too typewriter. But probably headed in that direction. You might even go all out and try one of those display ones called things like "pinewood" or "logger" That would probably not be what you're going for, but I am always looking for the chance to use them

dgar,
@dgar@aus.social avatar

@asbestos
Hmmm, I couldn’t do that, but I might have a look through some crayon or chalk typefaces. Thanks for the suggestions!!

asbestos,
@asbestos@toot.community avatar

@dgar
Yeah, it's probably not a good idea, use caution with crayon unless you're going for cutsey

skyfire747,
@skyfire747@aus.social avatar

@dgar looks great. 🤘👍

dgar,
@dgar@aus.social avatar
Kierkegaanks,
@Kierkegaanks@beige.party avatar

@dgar baby you’re much too slack

dgar,
@dgar@aus.social avatar

@Kierkegaanks
but… I even got highlights on the tree on the same side as the sun!! And did you see the speed lines??!
🤭

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