I need to rewrite my subs package for 'The Journeyman' as my current package is getting very little response but it's an awesome book that needs to be seen. I also might change the title if I think I can get away with calling it 'In The Valley Of The Wind'. #Solarpunk#YA
Do you have a 10 - 15 year old in your family who would want to try out my new, unpublished young adult sci-fi novel? I'm trying to see if the intended audience likes it or if I need to do major re-work. It's a complex, nonviolent story involving time travel, different dimensions, unicorns, fairies ... and snails who can type. It's filled with word-play, has a gender non-conforming main character, as well as a character with a lot of OCD.
I can send you a printed author's proof of the book. #YA
If I've written a novella set a "high school" level academy, but the character is older than her classmates due to health issues keeping her out of school (so she's 17 and her classmates are 14/15)
Check this out!
You’ve seen the pictures I’ve drawn of the giant cave diggers in my future ice age series. These tunnels they discovered in Brazil look like the rock and ice tunnels they create! #scifi#FindingHumanitySeries#YA
Five stars: A Scatter of Light by Malinda Lo (2022) (October 2023) is set in the North Bay in the year that same sex marriage was approved. Aria Tang has found herself at her grandmother's place after topless photographs of her were posted on social media.
A wickedly comic feminist mystery about the dark side of a hopeless romantic’s seemingly perfect love story—for readers of Jessica Goodman and Kara Thomas.
The trilogy of Ferryman is now complete : Ferryman, Trespassers and Outcasts. I only read the first book for the moment, but I really loved this ya novel. The characters are very deep and touching and their backstories are explored along the way. Claire Mc Fall’s novel is extremely poetic and introspective. It is a spiritual and paranormal romance, a very unique mixture that kept me hooked.
To save money for the house move I've been cutting down on the type of fiction I usually read and trying to get by on cheap crime paperbacks, and I'm sure you're just gasping to know how that's been working out for me.
Well, so far I've read "The Only Suspect" by Louise Candlish, which is a thriller about a murderer who, twenty years on, is threatened with discovery when the neighbors create a Nature Trail near the grave he dug for the victim. I quite liked it - the style is nothing fancy, and the editing is predictably bad, but it's fast moving and has a certain amount of psychological depth. And although some of the twists and turns are predictable, others are much less so, and the dozens of plot elements are fitted together cleverly.
I also read The Haven by Amanda Jennings, about a gaggle of posh Oxford students who enlist a bunch of like-minded souls and start a commune on Bodmin Moor. Needless to say they get a real Cornish welcome, but the real enemy is within the gates. This wasn't very good - too many details about sustainable living and not enough thrills until the end, and bad pacing and plotting (which ends up forcing a really horrible offstage ending for the novel's most likeable character). But the worst weakness is the poor characterization of the cult leader himself, who remains little more than a stick figure throughout.
I also tried to read Brotherhood of Shades by Dawn Finch, because the owners of that gite we rented were giving it away. It's a young adult fantasy novel from 2012, and it's wretched. I don't know how it got published, even when you consider the frenzy for YA at the time of its publication. One cliche after another, just a bunch of toxic shite about a Chosen One being inducted into yet another privileged supernatural bureaucracy to govern the souls of boring ordinary people. The modern-day tech worldbuilding is shit on toast and the bits set in the past are ruined by info dumping and terrible olde-worlde dialogue. The style is generally bad, but the most egregious thing about this novel, given that Finch is meant to come from a childrens' libraries background, is how pisspoor the children's dialogue is. Some of the adult characters speak OK but the hero, Adam, sounds like a robot impersonating a middle-aged man. It's actually quite concerning that somebody that deaf to real kids' voices and behaviour is even working in that sector, let alone getting published again and again by a Big 4 publisher.
Anyway, this was just another reminder that crime fiction has a higher overall standard than fantasy nowadays. On the plus side I scored an Amazing Free Gift of a Graham Green novel today, The Heart Of The Matter, at a brocante! I'm overdue a bit of quality, that's for sure.
📚Les #utopiales2023 sont ouvertes, et la soirée d’inauguration commence fort avec la « Leçon du président » Roland Lehoucq. Faire tribunes pleines sur le sujet de l’antimatière dans la #sciencefiction, il n’y a qu’ici qu’on peut voir ça 😀 #utopiales#sff#sf#sfff#mesutos2023
📚 La fiction utopique ou constructive est plus difficile à rendre excitante que la dystopie, plus émotionnelle et immédiate. North nuance en mentionnant l’intérêt des dystopies dans le cadre du #YA, où elle enseigne aux jeunes à prendre leur destin en main face à une adversité. #mesutos2023#utopiales2023#utopiales
A spellbinding romantic fantasy about a powerful witch who will do anything to escape the remote island she’s being held captive on, including blackmail a notorious, charming pirate who washes up on shore, from debut author Angela Montoya.
US Kindle giveaway: 10 copies of @michaelcbailey's ACTION FIGURES - ISSUE ONE: SECRET ORIGINS. This is the beginning of my favourite YA superhero prose series (and this one is on sale right now), and I have a bunch more copies cached for later giveaway. But I'm watching Heroes right now, and Claire pretending to be a stuck-up ditzy cheerleader reminded me of Carrie from this. I have gone on about this series in the past, so I will do so again.
𝐓𝐢𝐭𝐥𝐞: Assassin's Blade
𝐒𝐞𝐫𝐢𝐞𝐬: Throne of Glass (Book 6/8)
𝐀𝐮𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐫: Sarah J. Maas
𝐆𝐞𝐧𝐫𝐞: Young Adult, Fantasy
𝐃𝐚𝐭𝐞 𝐟𝐢𝐧𝐢𝐬𝐡𝐞𝐝: October 23, 2023 @ 3:35 PM
𝐑𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠: ★★★★☆
𝐓𝐢𝐭𝐥𝐞: The Assassin and the Pirate Lord
𝐑𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠: ★★★☆☆
This one is about 16 year old Celeana acting like the bratty teen that she is, her silly little antics come off as annoying rather than understandable because “she's young and this and that” though her actions did almost cost the lives of her and Sam. I didn't find much thrill reading this part of the book but it was still a fun short read because c'mon, assassins on a mission to find their fellow guild members in the territory of pirates? Great idea and could've been done in a very whimsical way but still better than the next one.
𝐓𝐢𝐭𝐥𝐞: The Assassin and the Healer
𝐑𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠: ★★☆☆☆
This is just filler, there was nothing about this that intrigued me or gave me any worthy information for when I read the main series again. This felt more like a one shot fic that's tagged hurt and comfort, not to say that fanfiction is in any way shape or form a lesser media, there are tons of fanfiction out there that have the potential to be their own novels and some being better written than the series that they are a fanfic of. But this was like, a fanfic without the strong feeling of a fanfic. It wanted to evoke softness and compassion, but it couldn't reach it.
𝐓𝐢𝐭𝐥𝐞: The Assassin and the Desert
𝐑𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠: ★★★★☆
Now this is the part of the book that is about Celeana's character development. She reaches the Silent Assassin's fortress and meets the Mute Master wherein her stay makes her slowly realize all the abuse that she had gone through in her life and how all of that suffering and pain was not normal nor okay. The side characters here were also more fun than the first two stories, they had a certain way of writing in them that made them sound more believable at least to me, more human than just characters. Or maybe it was because of the tone of the book, who knows? 🤪
𝐓𝐢𝐭𝐥𝐞: The Assassin and the Underworld
𝐑𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠: ★★★★☆
She's back at Rifthold and she's with Sam. Like, there is nothing more I could say that would explain the four stars. Celeana and Sam is my pre Celeana and Chaol. I don't understand why SJM chose to write her with someone like Rowan, there isn't a reason for them to be together. Also, fuck Arobynn.
𝐓𝐢𝐭𝐥𝐞: The Assassin and the Empire
𝐑𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠: ★★★★☆
The start was very dry but the moment the feel rolled in, it steamed on without mercy. Sam and Celeana plan to leave from Rifthold and perhaps start a life somewhere else but they need money to do so, luckily they are offered a job that will make them both rich. Seems like a pretty sweet and simple plot about two teens trying to make it out of their shitty lives hoping for better in the future, UNTIL THE PLOT TWIST AND THE ENDING. This part of the novella alone can go against the entire main series and win istg. 𝘐𝘛 𝘞𝘈𝘚 𝘛𝘏𝘌 𝘗𝘓𝘖𝘛 𝘛𝘞𝘐𝘚𝘛 𝘈𝘕𝘋 𝘐𝘛 𝘞𝘈𝘚 𝘛𝘏𝘌 𝘌𝘕𝘋𝘐𝘕𝘎
𝐓𝐢𝐭𝐥𝐞: Queen of Shadows
𝐒𝐞𝐫𝐢𝐞𝐬: Throne of Glass (Book 5/8)
𝐀𝐮𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐫: Sarah J. Maas
𝐆𝐞𝐧𝐫𝐞: Young Adult, Fantasy
𝐃𝐚𝐭𝐞 𝐟𝐢𝐧𝐢𝐬𝐡𝐞𝐝: October 19, 2023 @ 11:57 PM
𝐑𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠: ★★☆☆☆
At first I thought that once I read this book, maybe it'll clear out what Empire of Storms was all about and maybe once I finish, it would make me less angry. It did not. The shift between this and Empire of the Storms hurts because this book was as close to the original story as it can get, there was the idea and there was character. There was a yearning for love and intimacy that was never present in the next book. There were emotions, despite being the emotions that you wouldn't understand why the character is feeling that way, you'd still go along with it because those parts are what makes them a character, the way they act and feel predictable and unpredictable at the same time makes them sound realistic and grounded with how we perceive parts of people and their own ways of feeling and living. There were parts of this book that was never present in Empire of Storms and it just cemented my anger.
Chaol is present in this book and this is the part where he and Aelin meet each other again, and oh boy, I love the way that their characters had this friction because of how Chaol is going through this arc of trying his best to find where he must stand in the conflict and Aelin heartbroken because the person that she once loved sees her as a threat and as monster. They never miss, when they're together it's always so personal and character driven and I love every bit of it. This is also the part where they break up and it kinda pisses me off on how it was only a single page long when the author can manage to write 17 pages long of unfiltered sex scenes. It's weird but okay, sure why not.
𝖳𝗋𝗂𝗀𝗀𝖾𝗋 𝗐𝖺𝗋𝗇𝗂𝗇𝗀: 𝖲𝗍𝗂𝗅𝗅𝖻𝗂𝗋𝗍𝗁, Asterin Blackbeak, Manon's cousin reveals that she fell in love with a mortal man and got pregnant. She carried the baby full-term, which is rare for witches. But the baby was stillborn. Manon’s grandmother was furious and beat her, branded her with the words “unclean,” and cast her out of Blackbeak Keep. I did not expect such a thing to happen in a book like this, it is not that shocking at least to me because it is a story about war and all that, but something like this in a YA book caught me off guard. Not to say YA mustn't include topics like these but the way that it goes:
In the middle of it all, why must you add in the description of her breast? Not to say that you can't and you shouldn't, but it made it sound so weird especially when the scene is literally about the trauma that a woman went through in giving birth that also led to her family casting her away. That it was the moment that I realized, SJM would randomly describe boobs in random. Even with the way that Aelin wears a necklace, boobs would be shoved it there for no reason. I would understand it if it was for imagery, but the way that it's phrased and handled in context sounds more like the way that men write women more than anything.
Which is absolutely hilarious to me because in the following book, she exactly becomes that foolish and stupidly unaware because they had sex in the middle of a war on a beach. It altered my brain chemistry in a way that shouldn't be. And this is the first and last time that the book acknowledges the age difference between the two, hell, it ain't even an age difference at this point, it's a whole century gap. The Twilight era never disappeared, it only evolved. Dear heavens... This is one of the main reasons why I took out a star from my rating, it could've been an easy three stars but this had to be in the story.
One of the things that I adored about this book though was about Chaol and Dorian, their bond was solidified in this part. I don't want to get too detailed in case someone wishes to read the series P̶l̶e̶a̶s̶e̶ d̶o̶n̶'t̶ h̶a̶v̶e̶ m̶e̶r̶c̶y̶ o̶n̶ y̶o̶u̶r̶s̶e̶l̶f̶ but when one of them was severely hurt to the point of death, but they weren't actually dead, one of them thought that they were and they lose absolutely every bit of patience and sense of honor in their soul and they go absolute apeshit. Like YES! THE TROPE OF ALL TIME. I love them your honor, they deserve the world. 𝗜 𝗹𝗼𝘃𝗲 𝘁𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝗸𝗶𝗻𝗱 𝗼𝗳 𝗱𝘆𝗻𝗮𝗺𝗶𝗰 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗶𝘁 𝘀𝗲𝗻𝘁 𝗺𝗲 𝘁𝗼 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝘀𝘁𝗮𝗿𝘀 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗯𝗮𝗰𝗸.
What if you could avenge your own murder? A brilliant young woman gets a second chance at life in this debut YA tale of vengeance, court intrigue, and romance, inspired by classic Chinese tropes.
Il sort demain ! Cela faisait 14 ans que je n’avais pas publié de roman. Celui-ci est un conte fantastique mettant en scène une jeune fille obligée de descendre une montagne infinie. Arrivera t’elle jusqu’à Tout En Bas Tout En Bas, là où même l’eau se repose ?