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in , here's a about in . Please participate! Thank you. It's being run by @jhargrave, a lecturer in publishing at the University of Derby, UK. https://tinyurl.com/ynhcs9p9

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I'm currently eating popcorn with chopsticks so I don't get my keyboard greasy while I edit. That is all. 🍿🥢

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Finished the extra helping of The Afterworlds for the exclusive early edition. Starting final edits.

grammargirl, to random
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I just inserted an editor's note into a document, and I was really tempted to put "Don't @ me" at the end.

KPED, to books
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A book I edited was written up in the local paper.

So happy to see Shannon Bohrer's book, Judicial Soup: One Man's Wrongful Conviction and What It Means for Criminal Justice Reform, getting some media attention. This is a very relatable book on a hugely important topic. When you read it, first you'll be angry. Then you'll think, "If it can happen to that guy, it can happen to anyone."

https://www.fredericknewspost.com/news/arts_and_entertainment/judicial-soup-by-emmitsburg-author-highlights-the-need-for-justice-reform/article_ef4a743d-e470-5146-bf92-625c0cfb2a24.html

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GramrgednAngel, to edibuddies
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"Pushing aside the overhanging greenery, my eyes . . ."

PREHENSILE EYES

MUST BE ON STALKS

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GramrgednAngel, to edibuddies
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RAISE is a transitive verb. Raise the roof. (Takes a direct object.)

RISE is an intransitive verb. Let the bread rise. (No direct object.)

I'm always surprised when I see someone get this wrong. Doesn't happen often, but it does happen.

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Sometimes a word or phrase has fallen out of favor in our current usage, but it was common in the past. I'm not talking about slurs. I'm talking about things like "presently."

Current usage suggests changing it to "now" or "soon," whichever is meant. However, in the time in which this story is set, the word was commonly used.

I'll address this with a note to the client outlining the issue, and let him make the decision. His work. Not mine.

judylmohr, to writing
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Set a learning goals for every stage of your projects. It helps with imposter syndrome.

https://blackwolfeditorial.com/set-learning-goals/

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Helpful podcast from @grammargirl: “Efficiency Hacks for Writers and Editors with Erin Brenner,” author of new The Chicago Guide for Freelance Editors: How to Take Care of Your Business, Your Clients, and Yourself from Start-Up to Sustainability. https://tinyurl.com/24u5y6td .

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OK I just wrote the first draft of a 1200-word article, and it's 1500 words. Hmm. Time for a bit of slashing.

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There's a brief scene in which the doctor, who's been an alcoholic from childhood, chooses to pour out his flask on a rock before he takes his last breath.

"I done it. I'm goin' out dry."

Something in that image and those words hit me hard just now.

Words have such power.

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Watch out for mismatched numbers of body parts.

"The creatures bared their teeth and pounded their chest."

Surely each one pounds its own. They're not sharing one body among all of them. "Chests" is correct here.

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TIL that "extraterrestrial" as an adjective dates to 1848, but as a noun it was first used in 1950.

These things matter in historical fiction, or in set in a historical period.

Given that this tale is set at least 20 years after the earlier date, we're safe using it as a descriptor.

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Today in

QUAFFED is not COIFFED

Those fancy women in New York were not, I'm fairly certain, being drunk by others as though they were liquids.

KOKEdit, to ChatGPT
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Unfortunately, this isn't surprising. " are misusing and other chatbots to produce . ... One ... [study] found that up to 17.5 percent of recent computer science papers exhibit signs of AI writing." https://tinyurl.com/mrx4tmyp

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No, I'm sorry, but I won't allow "junk" as slang for male genitals in a story set soon after the end of the US Civil War.

The phrase "don't touch my junk" is dated to 2010. WAY too late, my friend.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Don%27t_touch_my_junk#:~:text=The%20word%20%22junk%22%20is%20American,through%20a%20full%20body%20scanner.

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TIL The singular form of "viscera" (you knew that was plural, right?) is "viscus."

A pretty unfamiliar word, sadly, so inappropriate for a fun read (for values of "fun" including cryptid autopsies). We'll stick with "organ." (It's an unknown body part.)

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A typical marginal comment:

"Gizzards" are specific to birds. "Innards" works here and has a similar sound. "Guts" would be all right, too.

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Remember to praise your clients when they do something well!

"His mouth was catching flies in disbelief."

SO much more evocative than "His mouth hung open."

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It's tricky, I know, but generally speaking we'll say "the body" when it's a corpse (and has been for some time). When someone's just this moment been killed, it's "her body/his body/their body" as appropriate.

E.g. Someone's been attacked by a creature and flung from a platform. "He was dead before his [not the] body hit the ground."

I don't know of any usage guide entries about this. It's a syntax thing. "The body" in that example could be someone else's.

Alexis_WordsUnbound, to random
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I’ve neglected social media again—oops!

April was busy, partly because of a big developmental edit.

Today, I start a fun copyedit—a fantasy book for children! So I grab my favorite editing-related mug and eagerly join the young protagonist in a new, magical world.

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The candidates who were victorious --> The candidates who won

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